
Setona Mizushiro
Go!Comi
Volume 9 is a standout in the entire series and could perhaps be considered the best so far. As the penultimate volume, Mizushiro finally resolves the mystery behind not one, but two, of the greater characters in the series, Kurosaki and Sou. Kurosaki was clearly always meant to be one of the principle cast as he was one of the few recurring characters introduced in volume 1, but I was still surprised to see that Kurosaki was the knight all along. I find it interesting that the knight was present since volume 1, but the second manifestation of the normal-looking Kurosaki does not appear until volume 7ish. It is a shame that more time was not spent exploring him in lieu of the earlier side stories (ie: the girl with no face, the giraffe boy) that could have been condensed or removed entirely.
"As long as it made my mom happy. As long as it pleased my father. As long as it made Haijima's life easier, I was fine with it!!" -pg. 28, vol 9.
As an aside, I also find it curious that Kurosaki's final outburst is about his father's aid and not about the pressure of his parents. In book 8, where we first get a peek into Kurosaki's psyche, there is also an elongated focus on a conversation between a younger Kurosaki and Haijima and their composed goodbye. Given Mizushiro's history as both a shoujo and BL mangaka, I'd be willing to bet good money that Mizushiro originally meant to expand on a boys love aspect between Kurosaki and Haijima but removed any explicit explanations in the final drafts to prevent compromising the general plot for cheesy romance. Mizushiro's knack for subtlety is one thing I adore about her as a storyteller.
Volume 8, Japanese edition, pg 178.
One of the biggest objections I had with the ASN series was the inconsistency of Sou's character (I love you, I don't love you, I'm a sweetheart, I'm an asshole) and the shallow depth of character that the evil lolita Ai showed. I was uncomfortable with the idea that such a sensitive writer could shamelessly write such cliches, but in the end I attributed the minor details to Mizushiro pandering to her editor and the tastes of the general public. However, with the startling clarity of Sou's possible schizophrenia, Sou's inconsistencies become coherent and Ai... well, the Ai shown in the book wasn't even real to begin with. You're a clever one, Ms. Setona Mizushiro.
The book feels slightly rushed trying to pack so much information before the end of the series, but in Mizushiro's masterful hands, one hardly notices. Regretfully, I doubt any more time will be spent on character development, so what I hope for most in book 10 is that Mizushiro explain what exactly the dream world is. Already released a few days ago on Go!Comi's official store, the finale has yet to become available on Amazon and most major retailers. Why do you torture me so, distributors? The last seven pages are such a tease--I need more ASN, stat!
Overall: A-